The room was quiet, save for the hiss and the beeps of the machines hooked to the man on the bed. On a chair, next to the bed, sat a young woman. She looked heartbreakingly fragile, ready to break into a million fragments. Her eyes refused to leave the sight of him lying on the bed, broken, comatose. Just then, the doctor walked in. After examining the man, he turned to the young woman and said, “He is not responding. He seems to have lost the will to fight. Priti, you need to make a decision. I will wait till tomorrow morning!”
After the doctor left, Priti covered her face with her hands as she broke down. Twenty-four hours to make a decision that would change the course of her life? A decision, that would shatter her life, her heart and her soul? “Why Adi? Why?”She wailed, remembering the hot summer’s day, five years ago, when she had first met him. Of how, she had tripped on the pavement, just before her meeting at the bank. How Adi, passing by, had helped her gather the papers. Of the how, Priti had been so attracted by Adi’s dancing eyes and sincere smile, that she had impulsively asked him out for a coffee. Their coffee date was the start of a flirtation that lead to love. A couple of years later, they had moved in together.
The past few months though, Priti and Adi’s relationship had hit a rough patch. Adi’s failure in raising capital for his start-up had shaken his self-worth. Adi had started doubting everything about himself. He had lost his passion for life. Every day he sank deeper into depression, thinking of self-harm. Priti had tried her best to remind him of his abilities and her love. But failed. That night, Priti had waited past midnight to tell him a piece of news that would give him hope, give him a reason to live for. But instead, a phone call had come from his phone. Only, it was not his voice at the other end but a stranger’s. Adi had been in an accident and was in a hospital.
Numb with shock, Priti had rushed to the hospital where she found that Adi had sustained extensive head injuries. Only the machines were keeping him alive. Priti needed to make a decision. Of whether to prolong his life in this state or let his soul fly free. “Why don’t you fight? For me? For our love?” she shouted at him. But he remained immobile, impassive.
Taking a deep breath, Priti shuddered and said, “If this is the last night I am going to be spending with you, I will not waste it with tears“. Priti spent the night laughing and talking, reminding him of their love. The only response she got was the hiss and the beep of the machines. And yet, she continued talking.
At eight in the morning, the doctor was back. He asked, “have you decided?”
Priti nodded. Leaning over Adi, she whispered something in his ear. Dropping a soft kiss over his unresponsive lips, she turned to the doctor, saying, “Go ahead”.
As the machines went quiet, the doctor leaned over to check Adi. He looked up in surprise. There was a faint heartbeat. After waiting for five minutes, the doctor checked again. The heartbeat was stronger! He was amazed. Priti, who had not looked away from Adi’s face for even a minute, smiled gently.
Putting a gentle hand on her stomach, she said,” He now has a reason to live for”.
This post is written for StorytellersBlogHop FEB 2021 by Ujjwal (https://mywordsmywisdom.com) & MeenalSonal (www.auraofthoughts.com).
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Lovely story Harshitha. Enjoyed it. We all need reasons to live, smile and breath on!
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Thank you so much Sudha
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Wow!! A reason to live and support of your loved ones is all you need to do anything in the whole world. It can even save you. It is a wonderfully penned story.
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Thank you so much 🌸
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Wow Harshita, Priti has hope and she has passed on to numb Adi too. My heartbeats were rising as I was waiting for Priti decision. Very well penned for the prompt.
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Thank you so much 🌸
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Beautiful. The love is the strongest force. loved the ending.
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What a cute little story of affection passion and emotions. Beautiful rendition
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Thank you so much Rakhi🌸
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Thank you so much 🌸
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Such a refreshing and hopeful take on the prompt, Harshita.
As always your writing is gripping and keeps the reader hooked, even as your words make us feel the emotions your protagonists do.
Enjoyed reading this unusual love story.
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How lovely! Sometimes more than medication, it’s love and hope that works. Beautifully woven.
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Thank you Sonia, always look forward to your feedback 🌸
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Poignant, and very well written. I’m so glad it ended on a positive note.
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Thank you so much Tarang!
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What a lovely story!
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Thank you so much 🌸
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All along I was thinking about your story that what surprise would I receive from Harshita. And see, here you go! What a brilliant story of hope, love, and life! Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I have no other words ro describe. And trust me Harshita, I had goosebumps while reading the ending. Brilliant plot. Must confess, you’re a magician of stories.
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Thank you so much Swarnali. Your words give me hope I am on the right path 🙏
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Best wishes always 💐💐
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Love and hope are the most important things in life. This is the essence of this wonderful story.
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Yes, there is no life without love and hope
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Oh my! This tore my heart and I was sobbing by the end. Love can bring miracles isn’t it?
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Thank you so much, Rubitah, for ur kind word. Yes, love can bring miracles.
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Lovely… I am happy that adi and priti found a reason to live and a possibility of a fresh start.
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Thank you Neha
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What a beautiful tale of having loved and lost and won again. Truly, miracles overpower science and logic.
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Thank You so much 🌸
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This story is awesome! Beautiful well penned, emotional, and all in one hopeful.👌👌👌
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Thank you so much Sivaranjini
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Lovely story. Loved the positive ending.
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A story of hope and an indomitable will.
Wonderfully shared, Harshita.
Great plot, characters and narration.
Adi is so lucky that he has such a wonderful partner Priti by his side, who literally earns him back from the jaws of death. Adi definitely has to recover and enjoy parenthood.
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I was glued till the very last word! The story was so lively and yes, we all need a reason to survive. Wonderfully penned. Loved it
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Thank you so much Chinmayee 🌸
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My Pleasure !
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So aptly said, Harshita. There needs to be a reason for everyone to live peacefully and happily. Nicely woven fiction.
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Thank you Geethica
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I was bracing myself for sad tears towards the end but they turned out to be happy ones instead. Love has the power to turn life around. Such a beautiful story, Harshita!
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Thank you Varsha 🌸
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Beautiful and emotional. It made me weep. Amazing.
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Thank you Monideepa
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Love truly conquers all. A sweet story that appealed to the romantic in me!
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Thank you Noor
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As I started reading, I became more and more curious to get to the end. Love the hope to live for the other. It makes the best version of ours loves.
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